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     <meta name="author" content="Andras Schmelczer" />
     <meta
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-      content="Plant colours in your fleeting garden and watch them flow as time passes. Immerse yourself into shaping nature and nature shaping your work."
+      content="Draw colour into a canvas that keeps moving. Your strokes become paths for life that splits, drifts, and redraws the surface over time."
     />
 
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     <meta
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-      content="Plant colours in your fleeting garden and watch them flow as time passes. Immerse yourself into shaping nature and nature shaping your work."
+      content="Draw colour into a canvas that keeps moving. Your strokes become paths for life that splits, drifts, and redraws the surface over time."
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     <meta
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-      content="Plant colours in your fleeting garden and watch them flow as time passes. Immerse yourself into shaping nature and nature shaping your work."
+      content="Draw colour into a canvas that keeps moving. Your strokes become paths for life that splits, drifts, and redraws the surface over time."
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     <meta name="twitter:image:alt" content="Fleeting Garden social preview image." />
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         "url": "https://schmelczer.dev/fleeting/",
-        "description": "Plant colours in your fleeting garden and watch them flow as time passes. Immerse yourself into shaping nature and nature shaping your work.",
+        "description": "Draw colour into a canvas that keeps moving. Your strokes become paths for life that splits, drifts, and redraws the surface over time.",
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         <div class="splash" data-visible="true">
           <h1 class="splash-title">Fleeting Garden</h1>
           <p class="splash-description">
-            Plant colours in your fleeting garden and watch them flow as time passes. Immerse yourself into shaping nature and nature shaping your work.
+            Draw colour into a canvas that keeps moving. Your strokes become paths for life that splits, drifts, and redraws the surface over time.
           </p>
           <button class="start-button" type="button" disabled>Start</button>
         </div>
@@ -140,18 +140,18 @@
           </header>
 
           <p class="info-page__main">
-              Immerse yourself into controlling the convergence of millions of particles.
+            Draw into a field of particles and watch the simulation fold your marks back into motion.
           </p>
 
-
           <ul class="info-page__notes">
-            <li>Three swatches plant the line; the eraser carves a clearing.</li>
-            <li>The mirror folds one gesture into many.</li>
-            <li>The arrows change the season.</li>
+            <li>Choose one of three colour swatches, then drag to draw.</li>
+            <li>Use the eraser to clear space and reshape the field.</li>
+            <li>The mirror repeats each gesture across the canvas.</li>
+            <li>The arrows switch the current atmosphere.</li>
           </ul>
 
           <p class="info-page__main">
-            My implementation of <a href="https://cargocollective.com/sagejenson/physarum" target="_blank" rel="noopener">physarum simulation</a> introduces drawing and procedurally generated piano for a more immersive experience. Learn more about at <a href="https://schmelczer.dev" target="_blank" rel="noopener">schmelczer.dev</a>
+            My implementation of <a href="https://cargocollective.com/sagejenson/physarum" target="_blank" rel="noopener">physarum simulation</a> introduces drawing and procedurally generated piano for a more immersive experience. Learn more about my work at <a href="https://schmelczer.dev" target="_blank" rel="noopener">schmelczer.dev</a>
           </p>
         </div>
       </section>